Make Me Human! Comments

I besought a lamp of wisdom To find my way in dark of ignorance. Favourable lines. Wonderful presentation. Typically emotional and humour is strong within. Wisdom only can bring out from ignorance like darkness. Nice job on sharing such a nice poem.

Dear Suman, I like your poem 'Make me Human! ' and translated in my mother tongue 'Tamil' and posted in Tamil site 'eluthu' with a mention about you in reference.

Suman, I enjoyed this poem - being human implies the capability of being both the angel and the devil, as the Budda taught, find the balance in the golden mean. Somewhere back in grade 4 or 5 I was taught the importance of the 4 As and the impact they have on human development: Affection, Attention, Achievement and Acceptance. Imagine how a Soul would perceive itself without having experienced none of these elements in Its formative years in any lifetime as compared to having received, in good measure, all of these in a given lifetime...a universe of difference! Great write. Cheers!

Suman, I enjoyed this poem - being human implies the capability of being both the angel and the devil, as the Budda taught, find the balance in the golden mean. Somewhere back in grade 4 or 5 I was taught the importance of the 4 As and the impact they have on human development: Affection, Attention, Achievement and Acceptance. Imagine how a Soul would perceive itself without having experienced none of these elements in Its formative years in any lifetime as compared to having received, in good measure, all of these in a given lifetime...a universe of difference! Cheers!

Good one, I like it.

We can be encouraged to take the wrong path which leads to so many problems but our mistakes makes us human we just need some guidance! Very interesting and great write!

Putting arms in my hand And made me brutal butcher! , , , nice thoughts...10 never turned inhuman even if forced as man

Beautiful write. Make me human. Loved it.

its.good thanks..................its really good