Make Me A Bed Comments

A real marriage life! Love becomes an illusion, the more we get used to each other (wuod mama) . This is a nice post. I like it.

Sounds as if the honeymoon is over.Perhaps it will yet work out. A great title, Both enjoyable and troubling.Well handled

''make me a bed of love''-nice imagery, Simon, I like the idea to make the love be existent, moreover, to make it sleepy...maybe you should make the love be a bed for sleeping...but it's not a rule....nice poem, thank you for sharing..