Wednesday, November 11, 2009

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When I tell you 'I love you girl', do you believe me?
When I tell you that I wouldn't rather be, with anyone else,
Could you see that happening?
If we fly around the world, on our own cloud,
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*~*happily desturbed*~* ? 27 February 2010

i like this, but it doesnt really sound like my poems, forbidden love isnt something i write about.

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Accidental Emo 02 December 2009

It Is Very Sweet..Nd Cute=] There Should Be A Girl In Your Heart Dat Leads You To Write Those Thing^^

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Lady Of The Rose 29 November 2009

this is really good. its seem like a forbidden love but those are the best kind if you ask me. this a very beautiful way of expressing your love.

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Daniela Daraz 29 November 2009

I bet if you spoke that to any girl she'd instantly regret not having loved you sooner. Yet again this is a nice job.

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moon dust 28 November 2009

i could run away with you forever by these words alone, good write.

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