Make It Real Comments

Well articulated and nicely brought forth in verse with rhythmic splendour. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

woooooow kuya! ! ! ! ! Hirap magrhyming ee HAHAH

Yieee, ang galing mo talaga kuyaaa! may rhymes pa: D

A good start with a nice poem, Marwin Danao. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

come to read another poem by you- -but alas there is no new one- -get that pen to penning, my friend! ! !

dreams- -they torment and they give us wings- -well written- -looking forward to more from you