Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Thursday, July 12, 2012

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Don't make any attempt or try
Nothing will be provided by sky
As I stand hidden in cloud
Even if you shout a loud
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Efe Light Sakpere Mr Romantic! Lol. I love this poem, there's truth in it, we must wake up 2 reality, especially ladies; too much fantasy no gud.4 minutes ago via mobile · Like

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Naidz Ladia very beautiful oldy.... your poem sparks at night like the sunbeam in the clouds i like it precisely right like a dream in the crowd.. about an hour ago · Like

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Khushi Raaj Bhatiya Nice one. Make and believe

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Kannadasa Dasan you may be lost in dream...a good line..and meaningful 4 minutes ago · Like

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Erudite penning....I decided to leave PF as it was becoming too mundane...Was on PH from 2006 (when I first started writing seriously) up until 2009 when I got disgusted with managements abhorrent lack of care, conscience and monitoring the site for bad seeds & tech-problems) However, last month(June) I heard that last year there was a turnover in management, so here I am, to give it (PH) one more go! Good to see you are still here(and there) lol! ~FjR~

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Don’t make any attempt or try Nothing will be provided by sky As I stand hidden in cloud Even if you shout a loud

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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