Saturday, July 25, 2015

Make Amends Comments

Rating: 5.0

I write these words, in dedication to my mother
As with most of us, a teacher like no other
Who has witnessed so much in her days
And impressed upon her children: see through the maze
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Alfred Barna
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Roseann Shawiak 31 August 2015

I found your poem very intense, I had to keep reading it, from your first words to the last, emotion grips my heart and I must follow every road. Stopping, being quiet, making amends. A fascinating tribute to a Mother who simply loves you! Exquisite imagery, rhythm and rhyme exacting! Totally love this poem, give you 10 -10's if I could! Adding it to my favorite poem list if that's alright with you. Thank you for sharing this tantalizingly wonderful poem. RoseAnn

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Kelly Kurt 27 August 2015

A wonderful poem, Alfred. Your mother would be proud

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