Thursday, August 27, 2015

Make A Wish Comments

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Make a wish and swiftly act
No wishful thinking; it is a tact
To hide the hideous fact
Of your sloth and ugly craft
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Venkateswaran Krishnan Sreenivasan
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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 August 2015

Wonderful imagery. So nicely envisioned and depicted. The favourite lines are ..... Make a wish for the selfless mother Who sacrificed her only son in war To win laurels, acclaim and a star To live desolate and gazing afar. Many thanks dear Sreenivasan, may God improve your poetic imagination.

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Kelly Kurt 27 August 2015

A wonderful poem, Venkateswaran. Thanks for sharing Peace

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Venkateswaran Krishnan Sreenivasan

Venkateswaran Krishnan Sreenivasan

ERNAKULAM, KERALA, INDIA
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