Monday, September 3, 2012

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My heart is stubborn
And screams like a child
It does not want to
Say those goodbyes
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Joanna Pavlides
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Saadat Tahir 13 September 2012

Torment and tribulation writ large… Almost emblazoned across big Ben like a huge hoarding The hoarding held down by weighty considerations of here and now and blown billowing out straining the threads like distressing adversity…. The lines take small sad steps across the page like a Chinese girl tiptoeing up to her ‘master’… The tea ceremony goes on….the calm and composed upfront barely holding the turmoil and testing torture within Liked it… ***

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Indranil Bhaduri 12 September 2012

Heartfelt greetings for a heart touching poem.

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