The ocean was once a place
Of beauty and grace
Nevermore shall it be
Since it took them away from me
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I am in awe of your bravery. It takes a lot of strength to write about something that touches so deep. But you took the chance, and created something thoughtful and lyrical, therefore beautiful. I'm proud of you.
I found this to be very deep/strong with a complete sense of your trepidation towards the sea.