Saturday, November 21, 2015

Majestic Morning Comments

Rating: 5.0

Rising sun with new rays say
Come on and fly dear birds
I shall show you path to sky
Newly you will fill life light.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 November 2022

A majestic poem dear poet. Loved the humble poetic expression. Top score and to my favourites.

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 August 2018

Echoes of a new day! ! With the romance of nature. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Alex Sarich 26 November 2015

I enjoyed your poem.

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Alex Sarich 26 November 2015

well said. I enjoyed the poem.

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Chuy Amante 22 November 2015

you are indeed the rising sun namaste

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Michael Walker 22 November 2015

As I write this, It is a 'majestic, gorgeous morning outside'. This morning is a time of hope, time to thank God for the day which He has created. M. Walker.

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M Asim Nehal 22 November 2015

Morning is the best time to receive the fresh and new ideas, very well said, sir.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 21 November 2015

The beautiful poem in the form of a soliloquy of the Sun god is refreshing to mind of human, in a way it is a prayer praising the bountiful Creator. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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