Thursday, July 19, 2018

Main Moonstone Comments

Rating: 5.0

Man you are, maintain peace
Materialize your body inproper way
Matchless beauty is available in nature
Maintain proper care of it.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Mihaela Pirjol 09 November 2018

I like the format of this poem! Beautifully composed!

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Savita Tyagi 21 July 2018

Wisdom is the moonstone. Let its glow shine in life. Very nice poem of faith and spirituality.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 July 2018

Extremely well penned sir... the last two lines are the essence of this beautiful poem! (10)

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 19 July 2018

A wonderful spiritual write that gives wisdom. Liked the final stanza. Well penned.10+++++

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Irfanulla Shariff 19 July 2018

Meditate God and get peace…..a great message has been conveyed in this poem. Very strong poem on man, nature and spirituality…artistically penned! Thanks for sharing, Kumarmani.

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Mahtab Bangalee 19 July 2018

nice line penned- Merciless death captures any time. Meditate God and get peace Yes - right you are SIR

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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