Sunday, September 23, 2018

Mailbox Comments

Rating: 3.7

He was mailing a letter when he began feeling like a snook.
Because in the mailbox he had dropped his checkbook.
He became so frantic.
And the situation put him into panic.
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Lamar Cole
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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 September 2018

this poem gives the pleasant sour and sweet. Wisely delineated. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.10

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Bernard F. Asuncion 24 September 2018

Lamar, you have made me laugh hehehehehehe...................................

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Rini Philip 24 September 2018

Funny poem..no wonder how careless people become panic

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Practicing Poetess 23 September 2018

A somewhat funny, somewhat serious poem about an unfortunate soul. In his case, we hope that the postal employees are all honest. Because not all are. An interesting poem, Lamar!

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Sandra Feldman 23 September 2018

A panic and economically fatal situation, Succinctly, realistically and magnificently portrayed. Reaching the reader, perfectly.

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