Thursday, February 16, 2006

Maidens Comments

Rating: 4.8

Flowers in class, the young girls ripple
and chatter
laughing together in twos and threes
their pages rustling
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Linda Hepner
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Scarlett Treat 21 February 2006

Poor little flowers, how innocently they go forth, to be plucked. I couldn't help but think that sometimes, it is the gardner that does the plucking. What a horrible thought, but a comment on our world today, that we are so afraid for our little flowers. Linda

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Ernestine Northover 16 February 2006

Hey, I liked this one. Great write. love Ernestine XXX

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Elya Thorn 16 February 2006

Great subject to write on, I also love the analogy! :) ~~Elya Thorn~~

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David Zvekic 16 February 2006

wait.. is this poem actually about flowers?

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Linda Hepner

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