Thursday, November 5, 2009

Maiden Voyage Comments

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In my imagination
the thing I saw was cursed
It slid across a giant plane
the journey was it`s first
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Malini Kadir 18 August 2010

touched the chord of sympathy....in vibrant heart of the reader.... your reach with the words! infinitive the ripples of thoughts born!

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Chitra - 18 November 2009

Interesting poem! Resonant imagery creates the spectrum of deep thoughts.

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Joe Corbett

Joe Corbett

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