.oh the maiden kiss immemorial
lapping over sweet crystals of dream
yet divine share of nectar pulsating
on furrows of hours be speckling to slipping moments,
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A very torrid write about the maiden kiss, very well-rounded poem. Keep'em coming. Lynn
A breathtaking poem. What imagery and diction! Great subject - reminds me of the purity of my adolescence. Hate ratings, especially with a poem like this. John and take care
.oh the maiden kiss immemorial lapping over sweet crystals of dream yet divine share of nectar pulsating on furrows of hours be speckling to slipping moments, .... Lovely masterpiece well narrated meaningful wordings to express the sweet maiden kiss..10++++
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‘oh the maiden kiss immemorial lapping over sweet crystals of dream yet divine share of nectar pulsating on furrows of hours be speckling to slipping moments, ‘ A truly …‘virgin-kiss’…’guileless’ … ‘genteeled’…sure to bring ‘pulsating nectar’ Speckling sprinkling motifs mosaics will catch all moments if slips… [to me] lolol Very original poem Voted 10 Ms. Nivedita UK
i agree with lynn. it is indeed a well rounded poem. i like it.