Sunday, May 16, 2010

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ****maiden Kiss ****! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Comments

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.oh the maiden kiss immemorial
lapping over sweet crystals of dream
yet divine share of nectar pulsating
on furrows of hours be speckling to slipping moments,
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Dr subhendu kar
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i agree with lynn. it is indeed a well rounded poem. i like it.

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Lynn Glover 20 May 2010

A very torrid write about the maiden kiss, very well-rounded poem. Keep'em coming. Lynn

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John Oconnell 19 May 2010

A breathtaking poem. What imagery and diction! Great subject - reminds me of the purity of my adolescence. Hate ratings, especially with a poem like this. John and take care

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Sreekala Sukumaran 19 May 2010

.oh the maiden kiss immemorial lapping over sweet crystals of dream yet divine share of nectar pulsating on furrows of hours be speckling to slipping moments, .... Lovely masterpiece well narrated meaningful wordings to express the sweet maiden kiss..10++++

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Preetam Shetty 19 May 2010

Your ideas and the words you use to convey those masterpieces are greatly appreciated

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‘oh the maiden kiss immemorial lapping over sweet crystals of dream yet divine share of nectar pulsating on furrows of hours be speckling to slipping moments, ‘ A truly …‘virgin-kiss’…’guileless’ … ‘genteeled’…sure to bring ‘pulsating nectar’ Speckling sprinkling motifs mosaics will catch all moments if slips… [to me] lolol Very original poem Voted 10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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Nimal Dunuhinga 16 May 2010

First is hard to get but the rest comes easily, a sweet kiss!

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