Maiden At Heart Comments

this is a beautiful write. enjoyed the read

Being an average student of this art, I am honored, Jasmeen for the kind acceptance esp in this beautiful poem!

Beautiful lines, your choice of words is always apt and the style is expressive...a humble suggestion, if you replace the first word Thy with Your, and Doth as well, it will go according to the rest of the composition...nice poem! ! !

A delightful poem that flows like a stream. Lovely.

Very important to stay simple and lovely and not just to show something nice toward the world.

Archaic words usage though given classical tough but poem sounds too spanking new, elegant, refined & polished...wao

Simplicity beautify face through the heart and tongue

A very well constructed poem with flow of words impeccable. Nice reading.