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an imagery of spirituality and religion rounded to one's personality well written poem sir...10

very beautiful dear kamran each one is a unique persona you have nicely portrayed -10 anjali

another fine write from a fine poet

Amazing... truly amzaing. well done

fine n excellent poem.

this is a superb piece and an eloquent write.A Pleasure to read

Such a deep meaningful poem with my realization I am so lucky to live in Australia. Your emotions come so much to the fore and your writing is especially talented. Top marks Karin Anderson

'A human made to be examined Created to be prosecuted For the sins I was predisposed to commit While walking on the ashen breasts Of my mother earth'........ Yes, Kamranbhai, Fate/Naseeb..whatever...the inevitable is just that. I believe when one loves God less than humans.. one is asking for trouble. History has shown us this again and again. Good, insightful write. Keep on! Cheers. Subroto

Very eloquent. You have a way with words and emotions. Kind regards, Sandra

each created in HIS unique way...and every human is unique as HE spoke...let's remember HIM/HER at least for a wink each day!

The flesh and the spirit war constantly. The spirit is truly willing but the flesh is weak.