Wednesday, August 5, 2009

Magnets Comments

Rating: 4.9

Wrapped carefully in words, feelings
travel across the miles. Edgy fingers;
wait to kiss the heart of keyboard,
mindful of space bar.
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Nikunj Sharma
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Beautiful poem. Congratulations, dear poet. Today this poem is included in the Honoured list of Best Poems Of Member Poets at rank no.56. All the best, Dear Poet. Please continue to write and share on ph

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Sorry. It is Rank no.59.

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Robyn Selters 30 March 2016

simply love the nuanced ebb and flow, the subtle yet powerful linking 'far yet near, faint yet clear, ' such beautiful imagery and skillful mastery of poetry is truly rare and deeply inspiring!

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Melanie Johnson 12 January 2010

And so it should be in the top 500. Totally amazing! What I would give to write like that. =) Great work!

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Aira Olayvar 04 January 2010

Nice! ! ! Unseen forces; unknown faces, - (well described) Concerns for each other; Silent reminders of existence – (this is true) and belief at other end. Undiscovered magnetism; they defy the written – (it is where we all exist… in our own place…) laws - likes repel, unlikes attract.

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Gul naz 01 January 2010

nice imagination...........10+

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Kyle Shield Laster 15 December 2009

very nice darlin. i love your analogy of love and magnets. keep it up! 10+ =)

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Eyan Desir 02 December 2009

Nice image created in the poem well done...

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Budlea Ní Mhaolfhábhail 26 November 2009

A wonderful poem, thank you for sharing, I loved the flow, the rhythm and the choice of words, I will read it again when I have more time to do so and to delve into the world of your other poems! ! ! ! Thank you for you kind comments. Yours, gratefully, Ruth Lavelle 10++++

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Eyan Desir 20 October 2009

Fine poem indeed good writing

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Rachel Butler 17 September 2009

Unseen forces; unknown faces, Concerns for each other; Rachel Ann Butler

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You must be proud to have had this in the Top 500 poems Nikunj. We all send out vibrations that are picked up by others and you have explained all this in an extremely creative way. Another top mark to add to your great score. 10 love Karin

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Georgia Girl 16 September 2009

This is beautiful, and does explain alot of the inspiration found in poems...thank you :)

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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 15 September 2009

well said Nikunj! LOVE WAVES can invade the network and penatrate each Soul - each Mind. the sweet footsteps of Sincere words in the heart are the best proof of a Magnatic Poetic Love. Really you`re expressed well the SPIRITUAL LOVE/ 10 for your MAGNATIC LOVE

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John Knight 15 September 2009

Hi Nikunj - Magnetism is an amazing force and there are millions of electromagnets working all over the World to make high tech life a reality. The power of the NORTH & SOUTH poles to attract has a real counterpart in human magnetism. The beauty of Poemhunter is that through POETRY - which is a primitive universal force - people of different cultures - class - country and the religious and political divides can be attarcted to each other and interact through the common medium of poetry. People who would never meet in normal; circumstances and because of their 'ethnicity' might not even be allowed to meet! We 'Travel across miles' (V 1) we 'Know more about each other' (V 2) 'Heartbeats heard' Far & Fiant yet Near & Clear (V 3) . Magenetism is a Paradox so is Poemhunters! 'Unseen Forces' and 'Unknown Faces' 'Undiscovered Magnetism' - MAGIC! This poem so so describes my experience of POEMHUNTER that I love it (and wish I'd written it!) . Well done NIKUNJ I score it MAX. Yours in Poetry - JOHN.

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Chitra - 13 September 2009

magnetic vibes of imagination...10+

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Obinna Eruchie 13 September 2009

This is beautiful to read, Nikunj. Well done.

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Shakuntala Sharma 07 September 2009

lovely poem- a modern poem with old world charm

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Ritty Patnaik 07 September 2009

dear nikung....this is a lovely poem, and i enjoyed reading it.poem hunter, apart from its basic reason for being there for poets as a platform, is also binding them in the faternity of friendship.enjoyed reading this, .bestwishes .......ritty

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Hailey Agnew 02 September 2009

very good poem, any writer can relate.

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Manu Ahuja 02 September 2009

truly magnetic...amazing poem.

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