Magnets Poem by Nikunj Sharma

Magnets

Rating: 4.9


Wrapped carefully in words, feelings
travel across the miles. Edgy fingers;
wait to kiss the heart of keyboard,
mindful of space bar.

To know more about
each other, They live another day
full of smiles. Praying in their world;
playing the part assigned.

Heartbeats heard, stethoscope
not required, each beat expressive of
its intent. Far yet near
Faint yet clear.

Unseen forces; unknown faces,
Concerns for each other;
Silent reminders of existence
and belief at other end.

Undiscovered magnetism;
they defy the written
laws - likes repel, unlikes attract.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kyle Shield Laster 15 December 2009

very nice darlin. i love your analogy of love and magnets. keep it up! 10+ =)

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Eyan Desir 02 December 2009

Nice image created in the poem well done...

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Budlea Ní Mhaolfhábhail 26 November 2009

A wonderful poem, thank you for sharing, I loved the flow, the rhythm and the choice of words, I will read it again when I have more time to do so and to delve into the world of your other poems! ! ! ! Thank you for you kind comments. Yours, gratefully, Ruth Lavelle 10++++

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Eyan Desir 20 October 2009

Fine poem indeed good writing

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Beautiful poem. Congratulations, dear poet. Today this poem is included in the Honoured list of Best Poems Of Member Poets at rank no.56. All the best, Dear Poet. Please continue to write and share on ph

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Sorry. It is Rank no.59.

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Robyn Selters 30 March 2016

simply love the nuanced ebb and flow, the subtle yet powerful linking 'far yet near, faint yet clear, ' such beautiful imagery and skillful mastery of poetry is truly rare and deeply inspiring!

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Melanie Johnson 12 January 2010

And so it should be in the top 500. Totally amazing! What I would give to write like that. =) Great work!

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Aira Olayvar 04 January 2010

Nice! ! ! Unseen forces; unknown faces, - (well described) Concerns for each other; Silent reminders of existence – (this is true) and belief at other end. Undiscovered magnetism; they defy the written – (it is where we all exist… in our own place…) laws - likes repel, unlikes attract.

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Gul naz 01 January 2010

nice imagination...........10+

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