Thursday, July 23, 2009

Magnet And Metal Comments

Rating: ★5.0

A strong magnet you are
And I'm a weak metal
Between us there's an energy
Force of your gravity
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Lycko Chizo
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Hiding Nothing 24 July 2009

this poem is okay but you need to work on your phrasing a few of the lines don't make sense

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Chloe Young 23 July 2009

ahh, good metaphor for love that you can't keep from. good poem, keep writing <3 10

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Lycko Chizo

Lycko Chizo

Philippines
Lycko Chizo
Lycko Chizo
Philippines
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