Magicks Demise Comments

One thing I see a lot of on the site is people using exclamation! ! ! After literally every line. It takes away from the power of the mark and reads as if the author is shouting at you. Your use in this poem however, is done with perfect intent and an appropriate end result. The final line needed a bit more emphasis, an 'oomph' to drive the point home and give it weight. Another well written piece in this ongoing string of poems which could quite easily be considered a saga. It tells the story of you and your giant.