Sunday, June 24, 2012

Magical Flute… 2506-12 Comments

Rating: 3.3

lazy and sheathed the carrier at ease
no sooner a bit to eyes a please

rises to the occasion slowly swells
soon any doubts in prospectives quells
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saadat tahir
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Ruby Honeytip 23 December 2012

Ever the lady.....I shall merely smile...nod....and say, this is a mighty poem: -) I shall say nothing of my talents as a flute player at all.

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Rigzin Namgyal 21 August 2012

..as i always said..there is fire in your writing.. :)

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Ruth Walters 14 August 2012

The flute truly is a magical instrument as is this poem that gives it life....

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Nadood Al Nasser 17 July 2012

very beautiful, it is very extraordinary. loved it

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Jahan Zeb 16 July 2012

Simply......I want to study you to understand poetry, your poetry in particular...... Not Difficult, For that I just have to visit you in Islamabad and ask you lots of questions. Really you are great sir. Remarkable

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Karen Sinclair 01 July 2012

You are an exceptional poet... words curtail comfortably for you and praise your thoughts and emotions...wonderful top notch write dear fella!

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Zaarah Jasmin 30 June 2012

seem's clear this is self narrated and composed, love the rhymes on each phares.. :)

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Kasia Fedyk 30 June 2012

This poem is magical and beautiful Saadat, I so enjoyed it reading it and found myself in this music. Sublime. Thank you.

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Captain Cur 29 June 2012

Very interesting double take. I liked it, very creative.

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Indira Babbellapati 29 June 2012

hmmmmmmm: :)))))))))

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Neela Nath Das 28 June 2012

I loved it.Kudos to you poet.

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King Big Head 24 June 2012

people say I'm magical

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