Magic Woman Comments

I'm not sure. I think you protest too much perhaps. Maybe a little insecurity still hidden somewhere deep inside? But never mind. Your real magic my dear is that you don't even have to believe in your own magic and it is still there for others to see. Even your beauty escapes the mask that you always wear.

ah that one was goooooood! I loved reading it!

Yes, it's not that strong but I wanted to show that you can do anything, and using a confident woman was the best way

I agree with you Mona. That was meant too be, it turned out a litter weaker, but I wanted everything to be detail to the last lines.thanks. Love doctor- Of course it's not, thanks for the worth 10 thing. I agree it could be better and stuff, thanks for reading this!

Good write It's not the best poem on earth but it's worth 10 keep been confident