You know me so very well!
Know exactly where I dwell.
Slowly at first make a spell.
masterly do the paces as well.
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good write there.....the emotions sail through consistently all through.......passionate and loving.........10! ....but it was too long......
memories of times gone by for me Saadat! ! ! ... enjoyed the ride Regards thanks for the invite...regards.. Alf
Undeniably superb poetry. Sweet soft words with passion and lust But that is the way for the bond of trust CP
Sweet and magic words that softly make the reader swing.10.
YES! That was a totally awesome experience - knocking on heaven's door. A complete soul connection, which is something difficult to describe, although you have done so quite eloquently here. I do believe you are a true romantic, as is undeniably evident in your writing. Tastefully done, with true passion. Linda :)
what a masterpiece...your imagery of love...im speechless...10/10
Good poem, too much worked out on rhyme and is long to read.10
Excellent poetry written.............