Wednesday, April 29, 2009

Magic Touch....Adult Not Lurid Comments

Rating: 4.7

You know me so very well!
Know exactly where I dwell.
Slowly at first make a spell.
masterly do the paces as well.
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saadat tahir
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Catrina Heart 26 June 2009

Excellent poetry written.............

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Reshma Ramesh 10 June 2009

good write there.....the emotions sail through consistently all through.......passionate and loving.........10! ....but it was too long......

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Alf Hutchison 10 June 2009

memories of times gone by for me Saadat! ! ! ... enjoyed the ride Regards thanks for the invite...regards.. Alf

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C. P. Sharma 09 June 2009

Undeniably superb poetry. Sweet soft words with passion and lust But that is the way for the bond of trust CP

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Sweet and magic words that softly make the reader swing.10.

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Linda Ori 02 June 2009

YES! That was a totally awesome experience - knocking on heaven's door. A complete soul connection, which is something difficult to describe, although you have done so quite eloquently here. I do believe you are a true romantic, as is undeniably evident in your writing. Tastefully done, with true passion. Linda :)

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Nasreen Dawood 06 May 2009

what a masterpiece...your imagery of love...im speechless...10/10

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Sadiqullah Khan 29 April 2009

Good poem, too much worked out on rhyme and is long to read.10

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Joseph Poewhit 29 April 2009

Reads like the real throes of love

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