Magic Spoon Comments

A wonderful story that holds us spellbound. Deeply magical and entertaining. A great fantasy read for children. Liked the ultimate staza. A meaningful message for children and . Beautifully crafted and well executed.

Mysterieus is the working of fate We do not know when fortune will accelerate. Yes Valsa George, fate works towards mysteries in proliferation if our prayers are in the right direction and with a pure heart. It's a great thing that you have selected a boy as the central character representing innocence. Thank you

A beautiful fairytale presented hauntingly and startlingly. The theme and penmanship of the poem is nice and touching. I quote...... The spoon had rare charms to his wonder With it he could always appease his hunger He was glad that he would no more be a beggar .............Mysterious is the working of fate We do not know when fortune will accelerate.... Beautiful poem.

Man is slave of his needs, the boy wished what he needed. A lovely poem....................10

A Beautiful poem and presented very well. children would really enjoy reading it. Moral of the story is beautiful.... Mysterious is the working of fate We do not know when fortune will accelerate....Very true said in few lines. Loved reading it.

A fabulous fairy tale. I loved the story. I wish that you try your hands in writing stories. I am sure you would be equally successful. I hope the fairy in your poem grant me this wish!

A magical poem. Loved it. Very instructional and encouraging for children.

Wow this super cool magical poem reminds me that in paradise the beggars would eat of magic spoons. U wrote and crafted this in an adorable fantasy way that both adults and kids can enjoy alike. Thumbs up poetess u can write for all. Nice to read u again

a magical band on her word pad how make a wow on her poems A magical belt so strange to sight When he bound it round his waist He grew stronger than the strongest ox That he could pull down the biggest of rocks

Ask for the little one and you are granted the grand one. The one who asks for a ton of gold must perish by not being able to carry it. Beautiful poem with imaginative excitement and a practical lesson. Thank you.

In one word, beautiful. I wish I were that boy. Children are going to love this poem. It is lovelier than most of our nursery rhymes - and, when I am there, may I say very well rhymed too. (10)

Well written! After reading the story, hope every child will have a nice inspiration in him/her as result. That'll make the poem worthier. Thanks for sharing.