Wednesday, May 20, 2015

Magic Spoon Comments

Rating: 4.9

Starved and ragged, the boy slept near the ferry
In his sleep he saw a fairy
She looked benevolent and merry
The fairy told, he could ask for a boon
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Valsa George
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 07 March 2020

A wonderful story that holds us spellbound. Deeply magical and entertaining. A great fantasy read for children. Liked the ultimate staza. A meaningful message for children and . Beautifully crafted and well executed.

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Mysterieus is the working of fate We do not know when fortune will accelerate. Yes Valsa George, fate works towards mysteries in proliferation if our prayers are in the right direction and with a pure heart. It's a great thing that you have selected a boy as the central character representing innocence. Thank you

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 April 2018

A beautiful fairytale presented hauntingly and startlingly. The theme and penmanship of the poem is nice and touching. I quote...... The spoon had rare charms to his wonder With it he could always appease his hunger He was glad that he would no more be a beggar .............Mysterious is the working of fate We do not know when fortune will accelerate.... Beautiful poem.

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Akhtar Jawad 26 May 2015

Man is slave of his needs, the boy wished what he needed. A lovely poem....................10

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Geetha Jayakumar 25 May 2015

A Beautiful poem and presented very well. children would really enjoy reading it. Moral of the story is beautiful.... Mysterious is the working of fate We do not know when fortune will accelerate....Very true said in few lines. Loved reading it.

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Rajesh Thankappan 23 May 2015

A fabulous fairy tale. I loved the story. I wish that you try your hands in writing stories. I am sure you would be equally successful. I hope the fairy in your poem grant me this wish!

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Alesia Leach 22 May 2015

A magical poem. Loved it. Very instructional and encouraging for children.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 22 May 2015

Wow this super cool magical poem reminds me that in paradise the beggars would eat of magic spoons. U wrote and crafted this in an adorable fantasy way that both adults and kids can enjoy alike. Thumbs up poetess u can write for all. Nice to read u again

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Kee Thampi 21 May 2015

a magical band on her word pad how make a wow on her poems A magical belt so strange to sight When he bound it round his waist He grew stronger than the strongest ox That he could pull down the biggest of rocks

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Ask for the little one and you are granted the grand one. The one who asks for a ton of gold must perish by not being able to carry it. Beautiful poem with imaginative excitement and a practical lesson. Thank you.

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In one word, beautiful. I wish I were that boy. Children are going to love this poem. It is lovelier than most of our nursery rhymes - and, when I am there, may I say very well rhymed too. (10)

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 21 May 2015

Well written! After reading the story, hope every child will have a nice inspiration in him/her as result. That'll make the poem worthier. Thanks for sharing.

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