Magic Of Nature~ Comments

Lovely poem on nature.

Great Poem Asim, the imagery is so delightful and the wording is flowing smoothly

Delightful and lovely images are conjured here, not to mention the rich colors.

The story of unique love. Using nature u did a wonderful job

Free flowing poem on nature.

I quote: The ovum of earth waits for sperms from the sky, To produce greenery on earth, And all this happens under the tangerine sky.

Filtered rays and the tinge of tangerine shade, everything looks orange. Earth waits for rains and the produce grows. Great lines. MAN

Superb, The blue ocean turns to amber, Waves dances on the silver plate, Vapours spread tinge of calmness, Pink lips turns to orange segments

Fabulous poem.. Loved it.

Awesome, To produce greenery on earth, And all this happens under the tangerine sky.

Very good observation...very good write...'The ovum of earth waits for sperms from the sky, To produce greenery on earth, '....interesting poem 5*****

Fantastic poem. The ovum of earth waits for sperms from the sky, To produce greenery on earth, And all this happens under the tangerine sky.