Friday, October 12, 2018

Magic Of Mothers Comments

Rating: 3.9

Walking vertical in search of love
Dreaming horizontal the charms divine
I am not much handicapped O you the orbiting spheres!
You are orbiting in thirst of the eternal wine,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 20 October 2018

in search of your father, but you don't have a mother, you'll never find that magical fluid, and you shall never succeed in brewing the eternal wine of love. Excellent Poem, Akhtar Sahab.......10

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Mahtab Bangalee 18 October 2018

excellently penned - O you the wandering spheres in fact you are handicapped, you have a father but you don't have a mother.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 13 October 2018

She might not have a mother but she is the mother of all. A wonderful mother of all mothers. A great thought provoking poem well crafted.10++++

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Bernard F. Asuncion 13 October 2018

Akhtar, such a brilliant write........................

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Kelly Kurt 12 October 2018

Many interpretations. Mother Earth is a great grandchild.

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