Wednesday, November 23, 2016

Magic Of Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

The poor laborer living in a hut,
sleeping on a mattress purchased
from a market of used things
and has been attempting to save him
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Akhtar Jawad
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Valsa George 27 November 2016

I never knew that love could turn winter into spring......! (Just teasing) Yes, love can work wonders....! The warmth of love shields one from all biting chill! Enjoyed this humorous write!

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Mithilesh Yadav 24 November 2016

loved it babajaan..... aapkey ek ek shabd mein mohabbat hai....... thank you for sharing

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 November 2016

Oh! What a heartfelt poem this is. I feel it as a magic of love. Excellent sir....10

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 23 November 2016

Akhtar Sahab! Magic of love, indeed! Deeply emotional and touching! Loved this poem. Surely, a full score!

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M Asim Nehal 23 November 2016

Unmatched, unparallel the magic of love well explained Janab....10

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Bharati Nayak 23 November 2016

Yes, magic of love can take away all pain.A beautiful write, thanks for sharing.

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Abhilasha Bhatt 23 November 2016

Reminds me of the creation by great legendary author Munshi premchandji poos ki raat....amazing poem sir....thank you for sharing...loved it :)

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Unwritten Soul 23 November 2016

Awwwww....life can be so hard but it never cant change some sweet heart....it always good to know that, wonderful write of a beautiful story :)

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Dipankar Sadhukhan 23 November 2016

A well crafted write. Thanks for sharing.

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