Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Saturday, March 21, 2015

Magic Mirror? Comments

Rating: 4.9

If I look in the mirror
And myself I do not see
Does it mean that I'm not really here,
That I have ceased to be?
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Kim Barney
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John Carter Brown 10 March 2024

Ah, questions questions.

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Susan Williams 29 January 2023

oh, now you have plunged deep under a light-hearted screen, now I know to read aware of a gravity beneath the wit---billions of stars and again a fav

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Kim Barney 29 January 2023

Susan, thank you for visiting this old poem of mine. I'm glad you liked it.

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C N Premkumar 28 February 2022

Beautiful imagination with spiritual imagery. Existence is a mystery. Excellent

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soren Barrett 31 January 2022

A great concept with wonderful imagery. Well done

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Bri Edwards 04 January 2022

i COMMENTED A YEAR (nearly) AGO. Have you perceived your yet? bri : )

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Bri Edwards 04 January 2022

intriguing, fine rhymes, and amusing. I vote for you being a VAMPIRE. ;)))))))

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Unnikrishnan E S 31 December 2021

Nice one, this old poem, Kim, loved reading

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Unwritten Soul 12 September 2021

First, thanks for visiting my poem... Mirror only can reflect your physical but the identity is not appeared, is there any mirror we can see our soul?

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Kevin Patrick 11 April 2021

A marvelous crafted poem Kim, for me this poem speaks of the nature of identity the fluidity of self. Inspirational picture! ,

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Bri Edwards 27 February 2021

well, Kim, at least i got to view a photo of you here today. I read and commented years ago. I hope you are well. i was able to sign in, but not much more, here today.

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Anjandev Roy 25 December 2020

Excellent work......thank u, dear poet....anjandev roy.

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Smoky Hoss 15 December 2020

Wow. I love your poem here, and the picture that accompanies it; so intriguing and beautifully mysterious. Brilliant work, on all fronts.

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Varsha M 12 December 2020

Beautifully penned sir. The train if thought on a ride just with the mirror so cool in vision but provoking in nature still I long to know who I am till I finally view my toe that looks so beautiful in you.

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Lee Boueri 28 November 2020

Delightful and witty with this persistent, menacing undertone, something that sounds a bit like " Come on, dig a little deeper, don't you want to know what I'm really saying? "

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Adella Banes 17 November 2020

I like this poem, to me it is of finding yourself when you cannot see how to, and of self worth and telling yourself you must go on. Great work! ! !

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Bri Edwards 22 October 2020

ok, i commented 5 years ago. that's enough. : bri

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Suresh Kumar Ek 18 October 2020

Existential poem nice work

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Kim Barney 20 September 2020

Thanks to all who have commented so far! Marilyn, in answer to your question, it was the picture that inspired the poem. And I do have a Facebook account but rarely use it, so I don't even know how to find you, but if you will find me and send me a friend request, I will accept it.

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Marilyn Lott 20 September 2020

Delightful poem, Kim, perfect for Halloween. I was unable to get into my poems to thank you for your comments so I will thank you here. Thanks, my friend, are you on facebook? If so, send me a friend request. Oh yes, loved this picture! Picture first or the poem? Loved it. Marilyn Lott

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Cowboy Ron Williams 13 July 2020

Fantastic poem! This is truly amazing!

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I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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