Saturday, January 17, 2009

Magic Melodies Comments

Rating: 4.1

Magic pipe played under a rainbow...
And the old oak rustled the leaves with jingle...
From far the wind brought the song secretly...
She is more aerial, than the dream sleeping
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Tsira Gogeshvili
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Roland Bastien 25 January 2009

the magic sounds -perhaps nothing more than abscence and rectitude- Icy voices into a solid gaz-

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C.R. Clark 24 January 2009

A melodious poem indeed, Tsira. Thank you. Richard

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Andrew Blakemore 21 January 2009

A deeply enchanting poem Tsira, excellent work. Best wishes, Andrew

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Indira Renganathan 21 January 2009

magic pipe...very true and your taste for nature is well brought out..great poem

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Vaibhav Pandey 19 January 2009

very sweet and charming.. nicely written

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Lynda Robson 17 January 2009

Magical words written by you, a charming piece, thanks Tsira, Lynda xx 10

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Kris Smith 17 January 2009

And you are magical with your words Tsira 10++++ Chris

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Fiona Davidson 17 January 2009

beautiful words Tsiri making beautiful images in my head...thank you....Fi

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Ency Bearis 17 January 2009

Alluring verses...nice write..10

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Ian Bowen 17 January 2009

Tsira, most enjoyable read. Good poetry. Ian

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