I am barefoot walking in the grass of morning,
The dew drops are comforting my feet,
I felt relieved by my stress and grief,
When i heard your voice in the grass rustling.
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Quite a heartening poem of love, beautiful and bright. Loved reading. Well done.
A beautiful love poem. Heartiest congratulations to Christina Teodor on her poem's selection as the 'Member Poem of the Day'! 'Is amazing how much miracle stays in a blade of grass' - love this line and agree to it.
Touched by everything that witnessed her lost love silently the poetess breaks her silence by such a nice touching poem. Congrats!
Very well scripted with love, hope and eternity and with nature how it looks amazing and calming.....well expressed.....10+++
I lie down on grass and i could feel its silence, I close my eyes and i enjoyed your voice, The smell of grass was taken on the wings of wind, Magic lies in silence of grass and in your voice. what a wonderful experience you are describing dear poetess. tony
There is magic in every single thing created by God. A blade of grass shines in rain, dance with the wind. Very nice poem indeed. Words are woven beautifully to make a simple matter so interesting to read. Congrats.
cristina, i had just logged out from ph but then saw this title of yours and decided to read your poem. it has the makings, i think, of an excellent poem. it's main flaw, in my opinion, is that in verses 1-4 you go back and forth between the present and past tense. with just a bit of tinkering you can put it these stanzas all in the present tense and make it better. hoping this is an encouragement and help, glen
it's beautiful loving poem.......congrats for being selected this poem as POD
winter morning the barefoot touches the blade of grass dew kisses the bottom of foot walker foot feels comfort in the hug of welcome dawn sun life is miracle more then this dawn on the mat of green grass though alone letter of remembrance coming and going in this alone mind swinging the mind of love on the hands of warming coolness touchless the heart reading and writing you on the valley of silence
PAGE TWO: I congratulate Poem Hunter and Team for their awareness of Emotive Poetry. Such a true loveliest poem. A 10 Full Score for this poem sublimest. She is like me on PH since the year of 2011. Perhaps she does not know too the ways to give response to all the comments..........like me too then, that's why I am active since 2017 on PH, I could only submitting, but I could not give response to all the amazing comments on my poems. It sounds odd....
PAGE ONE FIVE years in a row being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day, very very exceptional. CONGRATULATIONS on being chosen as the MPOD on 3 August 2016,3 August 2017,3 August 2018,3 August 2019 andn 3 August 2020. This poem is immortalized by now by Poem Hunter and Team....
Is amazing how much miracle stays in a blade of grass, Opening my eyes i saw above the sky, There was your face among the clouds smiling, I had the feeling that i want to hug the sky. - - - An exquisitely beautiful poem! Congratulations for being selected Poem of the Day!
The pain of loosing someone dear is nicely expressed in your poem. You brought some images live and the memories of walking barefoot on grass.10++
Such tenderness in thoughts and words. True beautifully worded. Melancholy is peeping at its door. I can imagine this poem in the Romanian language, Five stanzas full of suppressed emotions
Four years in a row being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day, very exceptional. CONGRATULATIONS on being chosen as the MPOD on 3 August 2016,3 August 2017,3 August 2018 and 3 August 2019. This poem is immortalized by now by Poem Hunter and Team. I congratulate Poem Hunter and Team for their awareness of Emotive Poetry. Such a true loveliest poem. A 10 Full Score for this sublime poem.
Magic lies in silence of grass and in your voice ....amazing how much miracle stays in a blade of grass.... //.... Magic of the morning walk. Awesome. Congrats.
Wonderful poem. Loved it.