Saturday, October 10, 2009

Magic In Your Eyes Comments

Rating: 5.0

In the magic of your eyes,
Rests a transparency and sparkles
But also dark, tempestuous twists
Along with a well hidden secret
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Romeo Della Valle
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Amitava Sur 12 February 2014

A lovely poem describing those beautiful eyes which provole and captivate.... very nice

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Mohammed Hassan 12 October 2009

I only just read a beautiful piece through the silent devotion well penned and direction very very well done 10\10

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Obinna Eruchie 11 October 2009

And what beautiful dedication to one with such inner beauty you may have felt.

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Anna Malmenlid 10 October 2009

This was a very lovely poem and it I can almost feel how those eyes graps me in with their magic... very well done!

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Romeo Della Valle

Romeo Della Valle

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