Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Monday, February 20, 2012

Magic In Different Style Comments

Rating: 5.0

She is on screen and just few inches away
Spelling magic in different style al the way
I sink with all happiness in a day
She is simply wonderful and standing at bay
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 February 2012

This remainds me of the story of Sage Viswamithra and Menaka. When the Cupid shoots his arrow, no mortal can escape from the act of love. Even the Lord Shiva fell a victim for his flower arrow, though with his third eye Shiva burnt him into ashes. The eyes of a woman is sharper than a blade, is the proverbial saying. Rajaram Ramachandran, Juhu, Mumbai Feb 22,2012

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 February 2012

« Delete » ?? ?????? ??.. just great Bozena Nena ciekawe.... lio nice » Elzbieta Kry.. very... nice.

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Martin O'Neill 21 February 2012

The meaning of your poem is very clear, even if there are a few difficulties with the language.

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Michael Williams 20 February 2012

This is good. Praise to the Queen in our lives. I like to some times write long poems. What is a pain to me is the figuring out uneeded words and still have it sound good when read.

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Mandi June 20 February 2012

This is a lovely poem. The usage of imagery brings me right into the scene. Exceptional! ! Can't wait to read more!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 February 2012

She is on screen and just few inches away Spelling magic in different style al the way

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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