She is on screen and just few inches away
Spelling magic in different style al the way
I sink with all happiness in a day
She is simply wonderful and standing at bay
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The meaning of your poem is very clear, even if there are a few difficulties with the language.
This is good. Praise to the Queen in our lives. I like to some times write long poems. What is a pain to me is the figuring out uneeded words and still have it sound good when read.
This is a lovely poem. The usage of imagery brings me right into the scene. Exceptional! ! Can't wait to read more!
She is on screen and just few inches away Spelling magic in different style al the way
This remainds me of the story of Sage Viswamithra and Menaka. When the Cupid shoots his arrow, no mortal can escape from the act of love. Even the Lord Shiva fell a victim for his flower arrow, though with his third eye Shiva burnt him into ashes. The eyes of a woman is sharper than a blade, is the proverbial saying. Rajaram Ramachandran, Juhu, Mumbai Feb 22,2012