Tuesday, September 8, 2015

Magic Beans Comments

Rating: 4.1

In a distant forest stood
A special tree that one day could
Grow magic beans with special power
workers will pick them for hours
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Kanye West
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Bri Edwards 26 January 2023

STANZA 3; brim, not bruim and I wouldn't use 'grain' and I say the water is drained (?) through the water. but I still like the poem. ;)

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Bri Edwards 01 January 2023

And, though I 'don't know what to make of it', your note, that is, I like it. ;)))))))))))))))))))) bri

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Bri Edwards 01 January 2023

five stars.

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Bri Edwards 01 January 2023

It's #54 today on PH's list of Best Member Poems [though I say not all are the best!

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Bri Edwards 01 January 2023

' beans are ground into a grain' I wouldn't use 'grain'. Maybe 'again'? NO. Anyway, I like the poem. I also give it five stars.

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Kanye South 05 April 2022

excellent poem, authors note is really insightful

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joe 04 April 2022

love the poets note, excellent description. Overall, poem was excellent

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joe 30 March 2022

was number 69 on best peoms

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Richard Dates 06 January 2022

A clever poem...a clever idea!

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Hans Vr 23 September 2015

Good, good, good. Congratulations from a real coffee lover/addict

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PP 05 May 2022

LOVE U DEEZ NUTs

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* Sunprincess * 11 September 2015

..........love this...an excellent write ★

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Lyn Paul 09 September 2015

Great to hear this Magic story on the one thing I could not live without and it always feels like a happy ending when I have one. Thank You and Welcome!

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