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We all feel dejected when situations become scary, when we lose faith in others we have to deal with, when we get furious and 'furiouser' (to mimic the accepted term, 'curiouser') . But I doubt if it is 'poetic' to repeat 'fear, anger, mistrust' from the beginning to the end without what is called 'objective correlatives', hinting at the details of circumstances provoking such feelings. But this poem has been lauded highly by several readers. Good for the writer.

The truth is the light! Nice work.

Wow! A poem charged with emotion! Nobody else can really understand how you feel, but you give us a good glimpse. Very well done.

Amazing inspirational poem with a positive note. Enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

Wonderful poetry. End in a positive note it makes a great reading.

Voices that I hear are not real, and all I can do is dream While the rain is falling until lightening strikes again- Skies clear and although skies of cobalt blue so magnificent Are in passing as is that phantasmal river before it overflows-

Excellent! A fantastic and rich in imagery write! Powerful and colorful, indeed, Claudia! It is a great pleasure to read and enjoy such an amazing write like this coming from a talented poet like you! 10+++ Keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from NYC...

Quintessential, magnanimous and magficiently written poetry.Honoured to read this piece.Trez bien!

Only you can know the suffering that your poem describes, but it is so well written that you give us an insight. I am sorry for the lack of understanding on my part, your style is very unique.

Casted a magical spell upon me over to the horizons which i know has met somewhere with your poetic verses...well done

Really a great poetry here, you have a high imaginative power that surge through your veins crossing the blood-brain barrier to a place where/ feelings are like thunder clouds/ blossoming hopes and sanity/ and /a river of wisdom overflows/.. This poem will be the one I want to read again and again...top marks for you 10*10*10*10*..