Thursday, June 12, 2008

Magic Comments

Rating: 5.0

Existing, brings boredom
Reachable, reaches saturation
Accessible, kills adventure
On hand, attracts apathy
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Indira Renganathan 20 November 2009

Magic ofcourse is entertainment as you've put it....your language is amazing...thank you Vidi...kindly read my Aurobindo-3...if only you 've time....you may like it...thank you

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Catrina Heart 25 July 2009

Magic has no power to heal It’s an illusion of impossible An entertainment not a solution. Sleight of hand hides secrets Countless enigma strains life Can’t we live with tangibles? -------- Fabulous written composition...well implied thought! ! ! 10/10

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Obinna Eruchie 21 June 2009

Let's say that the magic in your poem represents the easy way out which is truly an illusion. There are many people who want to make it in life desperately or who would want anything to deal with their problems easily. They are seeking the easy way out, they do not want to go through stress and all that. Then one again has to be distinct, loving, patient, determined, hardworking, sincere, jovial, happy and remain positive at all things to make it in life. Good job there, Vidi.

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Yelena M. 21 June 2009

You have expressed a very crucial and true idea in your poem..There is another, divine kind of magic that is Love itself. Those with empty hearts are searching desperately to fill their hearts with some substitute for love, magic is one of them and it is an illusion that seems to 'fill' a heart for some time but ends in vain, boredom and disappointment.Thanks for sharing and best wishes :) A.

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Bob Blackwell 16 June 2009

Yes magic is really all illusion, a sleight of hand, a mystery to be solved. But it is in the striving to solve the complexities of life that we gain. The everyday run of mill things that bore us, also feed and comfort us as well. It is in a compromise between the ordinary and the extraordinary we should use life's playground, but only for the benefit of all. Vida you write good thought provoking poetry which I enjoy.

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Saadat Tahir 08 June 2009

vidi writes... very well indeed yes...the elusive persuit of magic drowns usually off the shore...to the hollow beat of voodooo drums.....a drawn silent shriek from the alter of lifeless demons i remember a beautiful write...read sometime back 'the precious present' in the mad rush for the elusive something we loose track of our lives....you got me into deep thought very well written poetry, , , , purposeful strong almost aromatic cheers an ten

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Shashendra Amalshan 07 June 2009

well i honestly don't know ma'am...but i feel like i need some magic portion to make feel alive...well it is an illusion i guess, only exisit in harry potter.... hey i don't know this site seems to have some sort of a magic though can heal people.....anyway nice, effective expressions ma'am... you know what the greatest power Harry Potter had when he defeated dark lord...'love'.....love is magic....that's why potter's wand never cracked...(nonsensical huh, well some thing those things are nonesense) ... anyway with lots of love 10++ shan

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Ashraful Musaddeq 07 June 2009

'Magic has no power to heal It’s an illusion of impossible An entertainment not a solution. Sleight of hand hides secrets Countless enigma strains life Can’t we live with tangibles? ' Truly expressed the idea in the last stanza, love it-10+++

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Mamta Agarwal 29 June 2008

yes, when boredom sets in we look for excitement. that too doesn't last long.magic is an illusion.

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Bob Gibson 26 June 2008

Vidi! i am in awe of you! such voluptuous use of the English language! i am a devoted fan, regards Bob

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Kesav Easwaran 14 June 2008

mind's quests in search of those umpteenth 'un...' make the life magical and worth living...10

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 12 June 2008

Magic in magical words hipnotising the readers ........good one

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