Friday, August 14, 2009

Magic Comments

Rating: 5.0

I don't want you to disappear
Baby you keep me up in the air
The way you do
Magic
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Christina Phan
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Prince Obed de la Cruz 31 August 2009

nice imagery and figurative language!

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 17 August 2009

To read this piece is already a kinda magic.Quite a magical writes.

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Christina my Friend. this is an awesomeeeeeeeeeee poem.

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Ted M 15 August 2009

The power of Magic, and the Magic in Love. I can only say Vow! ...........10

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Romeo Della Valle 15 August 2009

Dear Christina, Magic is the air that you breath, Magic is the shining moon above when you are really in love, Magic is the deep feeling in your heart and which you freely can express without disdain...Magic is seeing the light when you blind, Magic is when the love of your dream you find, Magic is you as a whole when you face the music and let the illusion (no love) go and move on...until you find the real one...since you are Magic itself, when God brought into this world, keep it up, Love and Peace, Romeo

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HaZeM PaKKaR 14 August 2009

the more you believe in magic, the more you believe in LOVE.. it's a very wll written poem.. filled up with happieness.. thanks for sharing! !

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Nihar ... 14 August 2009

WOW very nice poem grly..... It has spread magic......... and will keep doing it....

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Christina Phan

Christina Phan

San Jose, Califorina
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