Wednesday, May 3, 2017

Magic Comments

Rating: 5.0

Magic attracts spectators like a magnet
Ability of magician can create spider net
Gathering people indulge, don't come out
In each sight they do clap and shout
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Indira Renganathan 14 May 2017

Each line is spiritful like magic... a punch in the last line is magical like the Supreme Being....wonderful Kumar- 10++++

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Magician of world, spectator of world.nice poem.10p

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Akhtar Jawad 04 May 2017

Yes, nature is the greatest magician and man is a glimpse the greatest ancient soul. A thoughtful poem Mahakul Ji.

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God is the Magician ultimate. We are all spectators amazed by his acts.

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Valsa George 04 May 2017

Yes, magicians can easily attract a horde of people! They are crowd pullers.....! How cleverly they take us to a world of 'make believe'! Enjoyed your poem..... quite different from your usual spiritual hymns!

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Kumarmani ji, a very fine poem woven into a magical spell. :) 10++

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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