Sunday, December 15, 2013

Maggie-Dog & Zach-Rabbit Comments

Rating: 5.0

Hello there, my name is Maggie-dog
And right from the start let me say
That the family have gone to the lakeside,
And most likely will be out all day.
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John Carter Brown
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Ellias Anderson Jr. 18 December 2013

ohh john....this one recalls my white little rabbit that my uncle has sent to me from Italy....this is really cheeringa and cool. well written.

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Paul Brookes 17 December 2013

I really loved this poem 10/10 still laughing you have a great comic touch combined with good rhythm and a well written poem I'm putting this on my fav. list. thanks for sharing BB: O)

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Paul Brookes 17 December 2013

Great poem 10/10 really loved it and am still laughing you really have a way with words and a deft comic touch, added this to my favourites list. Thanks for sharing BB : O)

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