Mafia Comments

Another deep write here, , , i recently watched 'The Godfather' again, there is nothing to be proud of except some human attributes of the man and the way they eat together, , also that part of Italy which is shown briefly, , , , , , , , How Mario Puzo conceievd all this, , well thats a great work of imagination, , , excellent, , , , , , , , , ,10

The structure of your poems is often like a scenario of a modern play - short introduction in the atmosphere at first, then the personages, often dialogues and many references to other genres of art, intentional eclectic, which makes the poems sound original and modern. (O.A.)