Sunday, May 30, 2010

Maebel Comments

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Drifted thoughts, drenched with confusion
stood naked from within
patiently removing each wave
rupturing each thought
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Emu Getachew
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John Knight 30 May 2010

Hi Emu - this is a wonderful poem and a great tribute to the poewer of the Storm (Maebel) and the interaction of the rainwater with the seawater. The water cycle (rain to clouds - clouds to rain - rain to sea - sea to clouds) is tha most important natural cycle driven by the wind and the heat of the sun. In this poem you have captured some of its essence. Thank you for sharing - Love you through Poetry - JOHN.

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