Madonna On The Amtrak Comments

The soft-shawl like waves of her long brown hair ....is is possible you meant...soft shawl-like waves...? ? Held in a timeless still, I saw a living picture.........you were kept confined in an alcoholic beverage-making machine with no clock? ? ? ? are you sure you weren't having the hots for the babe with the boy? ? a pure academic question, i promise you. i like the title. but i thought it was going to include some singing. am i being silly? no, really, am i? ? bri :)

Beautifully worded. A somewhat simple event becomes poetic and profound in your description. Very well done