Monday, January 18, 2016

Madonna On The Amtrak Comments

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Taking my seat, I noticed across from me a young
Mother with her child.
The soft-shawl like waves of her long brown hair
Delicately framed her face as it swept over her ears,
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Lynn W. Petty
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Bri Edwards 06 July 2016

The soft-shawl like waves of her long brown hair ....is is possible you meant...soft shawl-like waves...? ? Held in a timeless still, I saw a living picture.........you were kept confined in an alcoholic beverage-making machine with no clock? ? ? ? are you sure you weren't having the hots for the babe with the boy? ? a pure academic question, i promise you. i like the title. but i thought it was going to include some singing. am i being silly? no, really, am i? ? bri :)

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Mike Smith 24 February 2016

Beautifully worded. A somewhat simple event becomes poetic and profound in your description. Very well done

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Lynn W. Petty

Lynn W. Petty

Newport Beach, California
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