Monday, September 9, 2013

Madness Comments

Rating: 2.5

When it is dawn
The flowers look up eagerly
As if they are waiting someone.
When it is dusk
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Renjith V. Sathyan
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Lenny Camacho 10 September 2013

the core of this poem is beautiful, although it needs some work... keep at it

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