Wednesday, October 10, 2012

Madness Comments

Rating: 3.5

Slowly I slip into madness,
My lonliness is all consuming.
Nothing can contain my sadness,
The faint cries I hear are soothing.
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Ray Quesada 13 October 2012

Matt, you have natural talent. very evocative...with your natural gift, i think you will be writing even better poems and probably soon. it was an enjoyable read, i give it a 7, to save room for your 9's and 10's you'll be submitting in the future.

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Rebecca Dalmaso 10 October 2012

great write matt i know exactly how you feel....keep writing it is a great outlet for consuming emotions.

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