Sunday, June 24, 2018

Madness Comments

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The flickering flames of intense love
Rage in my heart like a burning fever
Turning my deep rooted emotions to ashes
Tormenting my agonizing cries into madness.
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Aarzoo Mehek
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Edward Kofi Louis 05 October 2018

To ashes! ! Heartbreak! Sadness. Take life very easy. Thanks for sharing.

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Unnikrishnan E S 12 July 2018

Hi Aarzoo, Love soothes all agonies. But, when it becomes selfish and unaccomodative, it is no longer love. Very poignant poem.

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Rajnish Manga 24 June 2018

Intense love turning into madness may be a haunting reality in today's world where mutual accommodation and mutual respect have gone amiss. Thanks, Dear Poet.

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Aarzoo Mehek 25 June 2018

Loyalty is missing in todays relationships. Thank you for the feedback.

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Britte Ninad 24 June 2018

love is fire of unknown affection no elements of earth can extinguish it If lover wants to extinct it need to know it firs..... lovely writings

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Aarzoo Mehek 25 June 2018

Thank you for such beautiful words. Love is a mirage.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 June 2018

A beautiful metaphorical poem on love has been astutely and touchingly presented. I like.... The flickering flames of intense love Rage in my heart like a burning fever Turning my deep rooted emotions to ashes Thanks for sharing.10

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Aarzoo Mehek 25 June 2018

Thank you for appreciating my little work.

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