Monday, April 9, 2018

Made In The Dreamer's Image Comments

Rating: 5.0

Who's at the helm; who's in control
if I'm but part of a larger dream
who determines how the plot unfolds
as I travel life's conscious stream
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Chris Embrick
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 April 2018

Spellbinding write. It fuels our mind and heart to affirm our faith in God. Yes, in this life, we are not alone if we share His dream. Loved the last stanza. Beautifully crafted piece.10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 April 2018

Death provokes thought but this is truth. We travel life's conscious stream. We bear the change as per command of time. Every person is made in Dreamer's image which is very amazing. There is God who is our creator and proof we get in feelings. His light and wisdom soul perceives by his grace. This poem is excellent and deeply philosophical...10

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