Friday, October 26, 2012

Made For Each Other! Comments

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Till the end, come with me,
I am a fragrant flower for a bee,
Head of intelligence to show you,
Let us have the garden, trouble free, .
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Randy Micheal 27 October 2012

we are made for each other.......i enjoyed reading it, its lovely.

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isam Abdelrahman 27 October 2012

I love poems that are born blood and flesh; this one certainly is.congrats

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 26 October 2012

Betty Lee, a dove represent a soul. Many religions of the world believe in reincarnations and the lovers want to be united what ever form that they have been born as. Just to show the affection of two hearts which want to be together always, I include that line. Thank you.

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Betty Lee 26 October 2012

nice, i like it. hehe. but i dun understand Pass through many births of a dove

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