Made For Each Other Comments
I remember the first day I met you,
I caught a glimpse of your face far in the crowd,
Glowing in the diffused golden twilight,
I strode in the seething mass to be near you.
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Such a nice poem, Nooruddeen. Read my poem, Love and L u s t. Thanks.
Very sweet, 'Aloft flew wishes of a moment alone for you and me, anon' you've used the structure to great effect in this poem, again sorry its taken me over a year to get round to it x
This was a lovely flow of passion. 'Oh how the ripples merge as one' aka JHpoetry
Indeed your choice of words is wonderful for visualization, and I personally love the development of the poem. Exceptional as always.
We are the only two in this glebe; the glebe is only for us, ” Smothered around us the halo of our love, We could see nothing but us, we could hearken nothing but ours.... nicely worded poems and felt from within.. it should result into happy uniosn as it leads to happy conclusion.. i liked it...10 read mine.. i miss. love at first sight
Beautiful poem, from first attraction to loving growing stronger and finally fulfilled. Your poem made me feel good.10
it is easy to relate to this poem i reckon. I think you would like my poem summer queen.
Very well crafted, in this poem two of them are made for each other...Liked it. Thanks for sharing....10+++
Really the two person in this poem are made for eachother........ very wel crafted poem. will give u 9
Hi Noordeen, at last, you are now (near) by sweet singing, lonesome, white, rippling brook......having luscious rendezvous with tropical life ……. the LOVE; breeding from your compassion is exemplary.. hit upon the contentment in the loneliness of two... a poem well written.. far-fetched…..Voted 10+ -Jaleel
‘…We could see nothing but us, we could hearken nothing but ours.’ Sparkling finish after cascade of ‘I remember’ Thanks Sir...this poetry gotten a final eventuality with brilliance.. Voted 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK
This poem is amazing! ! Great job. I like the rhythm of it too.
remember we saying “The day is only for you and me, ” “We are the only two in this glebe; the glebe is only for us, ” Beautiful tale of love going through various phases of life.
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7/19/2025 9:29:32 PM # 1.0.0
Beautiful and very compassionate write.