Saturday, August 29, 2015

Madam With Due Respect Comments

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With due respect, I am still thinking,
you might have defined love very well,
you might have defined life very well,
you might have defined time very well.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Melvina Germain 09 October 2015

Clarity, meaningful and forthright, I call it...telling it like it is...this is a pouring out of heart and it is obvious with a vengeance. I like the bombastic way of putting oneself out there and the invitation of a night of reality was quite interesting to imagine. The imagery is phenomenal and carried beautifully all the way through... Love your poem Akhtar.....

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Hazel Durham 06 September 2015

Amazing imagery and a great theme that is thought provoking! Superb write!

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Rajnish Manga 30 August 2015

Your caustic words in the poem and also in the poet's notes convey much more than they appear to tell. Very meaningful advisory to impressionable young minds. Thanks.

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