tell me madam spider
how it feels when I touch down
onto your inviting web
tell me how quickly you sense my entanglement
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fine and provoking.......justice n injustice like two sides of a coin..........swindling indeed ur multiple thoughts injecting slowly and sweetly.... rgrds/salu
A different outlook at spider, wonderfully dealt with. Very interestingly narrated. This is what is called true poetics.
a true exemplification of the concept outside the box you have woven a gossamer of fine images
a very well written piece, leaves the second part of the ambiguity to the reader? well done lee
simply it burns brilliant by the imagery of love latching on to mystery, wonderful write,10++++, thanks for sharing
I hope you don't mean any of us women contributers.(I've written quite a few love poems not for display.)
Oh, Lee, I am so glad you got outside of that box. Your poem was sublime (and somewhat scary) . As always, you are a master.
very nice piece you've explained it from the point of view of the spider, very imaginative and well though of, nice write
Innovative, fine metaphors used and imagery....I would relate this poem to those who are infected with HIV virus and still wandering on streets continuing infecting people to share their anguish sweet plight...............10++++++
creative write, Lee...scenic as well...i can visualise you standing there ready to plunge into her waiting web! thanks..i liked...10
selected poetic assets..nice poem..10+