Wednesday, June 3, 2009

Madam Spider Comments

Rating: 5.0

tell me madam spider
how it feels when I touch down
onto your inviting web
tell me how quickly you sense my entanglement
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Lee Crowell
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Marieta Maglas 29 June 2009

selected poetic assets..nice poem..10+

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Deependra Kumar Jha 28 June 2009

An Interesting write here! Liked it.

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Salu Salu 17 June 2009

fine and provoking.......justice n injustice like two sides of a coin..........swindling indeed ur multiple thoughts injecting slowly and sweetly.... rgrds/salu

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Sathyanarayana M V S 13 June 2009

A different outlook at spider, wonderfully dealt with. Very interestingly narrated. This is what is called true poetics.

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Chitra - 06 June 2009

a true exemplification of the concept outside the box you have woven a gossamer of fine images

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Elbert Matt Loubser 06 June 2009

a very well written piece, leaves the second part of the ambiguity to the reader? well done lee

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Dr.subhendu Kar 05 June 2009

simply it burns brilliant by the imagery of love latching on to mystery, wonderful write,10++++, thanks for sharing

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Sally Plumb Plumb 05 June 2009

Brilliant! Brilliant! Brilliant!

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Sally Plumb Plumb 05 June 2009

I hope you don't mean any of us women contributers.(I've written quite a few love poems not for display.)

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Callie Carroll 05 June 2009

Oh, Lee, I am so glad you got outside of that box. Your poem was sublime (and somewhat scary) . As always, you are a master.

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very nice piece you've explained it from the point of view of the spider, very imaginative and well though of, nice write

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Catrina Heart 04 June 2009

Innovative, fine metaphors used and imagery....I would relate this poem to those who are infected with HIV virus and still wandering on streets continuing infecting people to share their anguish sweet plight...............10++++++

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Kesav Easwaran 04 June 2009

creative write, Lee...scenic as well...i can visualise you standing there ready to plunge into her waiting web! thanks..i liked...10

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Fiona Davidson 03 June 2009

Beautiful writing Lee...10++++

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